"Here We Go"

“Here We Go” By Reece

Its 3:45am. I was crammed into a rowing boat like sardines in a can. I was terrified. I was loading my gun up. All I heard was BOOM! BOOM! BOOM! I did not like it, not one little bit. It was very hard to see where I was. The only light that I could see was the moon.

I was nervous.  I didn’t want to die. My arms were shaking and I had butterflies in my tummy. Sweat was dripping down my neck like it was raining. All around me I heard soldiers screaming and dying.

From the start. I wanted to go to war because I thought it would be an awfully big adventure. But now I wish I never came to war because I am now about to die…….

Reflection

I am learning to write an interesting recount.

I am so proud of making my recount interesting by using similes and adjectives.

It can be tricky to find the best similes to use in this story.

My buddy can help me by checking my work.

The next step for me in my learning is to write an even better recount.